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  i stopped believing
     a long time ago
and you never changed my mind

why believe in something
     you can’t prove
- something that can’t exist

it’s like thinking panda’s
are a rare type of fish
and lions are made of gold

not wanting to burst your bubble
but it’s a lie we tell ourselves
to make our lives seem worthy

and i’m done

i stopped believing in forever
    right about the time
you stopped believing in me
:iconx-dainty-dreamer-x:

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:iconheadcasechaos:
What did you stop believing?

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YoU BleEd JuSt lIke YoU PuKe, WhiLe RuNninG a MiLe!!!
:iconx-dainty-dreamer-x:
i stopped believing in forever
:iconheadcasechaos:
Not sure I understand...

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YoU BleEd JuSt lIke YoU PuKe, WhiLe RuNninG a MiLe!!!
:iconx-dainty-dreamer-x:
the idea of forever, for example 'i love you forever' etc is really stupid, because you can never prove forever, because there's always more time in which things can change, forever can't really ever be real because no one knows what forever is..if that makes any sense
:iconheadcasechaos:
I understand, but perhaps one shouldn't compare "TIME" and "Forever". Because Time is just that...Time. Time runs out it has an End. No matter how long it seems...TIME WILL END! But FOREVER, Forever is timeless. Something else one must also understand is the concept of Love. While it is a POWERFUL thing it is still a Choice. That's what makes it so special. No one HAS to LOVE anyone, but we choose too. No matter how hard it is or how much of a Pain in the Ass it can be, and no matter how much it beats our Ass like 300 Spartans...we still choose to be strong, we choose to LOVE. Time and Love go hand in hand. As humans our time on Earth is limited. Every second that goes by is a second we will NEVER EVER get back. Giving someone your TIME is a Great and Precious Gift a True Sacrifice. You gave something that you can never get back.

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YoU BleEd JuSt lIke YoU PuKe, WhiLe RuNninG a MiLe!!!
:iconsilencedvoice:
I love the panda bit :D
:hug:

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I cried with the last of the Time Lords. I cried with the Heart of the TARDIS. I cried with them, and Time was in my tears. :rose:

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:iconaelexe:
Unusually deep for something that doesn't appear to try much to be.

I like it. =)
:iconth3krimzon1:
I dont agree with stopping believing, but I like this piece.

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