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for him - with no promises by *x-dainty-dreamer-x:iconx-dainty-dreamer-x:



you asked me to write -
to tell you exactly what happened
because you say you weren’t really there
          and you’d like to know
(but i don’t know if i was there either
      so we might have a problem)

i remember the smell of grass
and poppies. your hands upon my hips
your chin resting gently on my head
the sound of silence being interrupted
      by every breath you took
and every breath i tried to hold back
i remember spinning around
              and around
you were me and i was you
and the world was just a blur of
paint scrawled  iloveyou’s
and forever’s we swore we’d never
                           break

but maybe it was just a dream cus’
    i don’t remember much
except that you were me
            and i was you
and together we were nothing
:iconx-dainty-dreamer-x:

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Sleepy sleepy sleepy........

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:iconguesswhooboo:
"you were me
and i was you
and together we were nothing"

Brilliant. O:

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Music, Love, and Creativity.
That's all I need. <3

Oh and a scanner would be nice too. -___-
:iconsorena:
Beautiful! This really hits home for me. I wish I could convey emotion like that through words.
:iconomgitshaylay:
this is amazing! it blew my mind all over the room. i love it!

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im over getting older ♥♥
:iconnescenion:
this si a beautiful peice of work it grabs you and pulls you in to deliver the key message, it doesn't run on too long its very to the point and unlike this message it knows when to stop. lol I love it.

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Wise men reflect upon their history, but to dwell in the past is the action of fools.
:iconx-dainty-dreamer-x:
i'm glad you liked it :) and the comment wasnt too long :P
:iconpink-flower1993:
wow it's so beautiful

--
Make love not war !

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