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every night i throw a paper plane out of my window
each one with your name, a note and a return address
written in green crayola and decorated with black hearts

01. “X - I dreamt about you, again. Now I want to be sick, again. In your arms, again.
           And again, I’m alone. But I don’t blame you, my dear, my X. My everything.

                        Yours fornever (apparently),
                                                                       My heart (if you still remember the way)”


09. “X -  I think that, maybe, you didn’t get my last note, because you wouldn’t just ignore me, would you?
                           I forgot about you yesterday - Just for a moment. And now I’m racked with guilt.
                                                              So this is my apology
                                        For  just a second I wasn’t abandoned. I was still alone, but not abandoned.
                                                  For that there is no apology I could sincerely give
                                                                   It felt good. But not as good as us.
                                                                        And for that, I’m sorry.

                                   Yours fornow,
                                                     My heart (just where you left it)”

28. “X - You stole my birthday wish. Greedily and without thought I asked for the world to go back to how it was before.
                     Before you left. Before I broke. Before things stopped making sense.
                                 I know I was selfish - But I’ve not always been this way.
                                                                       Usually I just wish you’d talk to me again.
                                            Remember - Only you can make my birthday wish come true.

                                               Yours whether you want it or not,
                                                                            My heart (still waiting)”

76. “X - I leave my bedroom window open every night, just in case you send a paper plane my way.
                            So far all I can think is that it’s gotten lost in the autumn breeze.
                                      Or at least that’s what I keep telling myself.

                                  Please don’t forgot about me

                                              Yours forever,
                                                           My heart (lost and waiting to be found)”

112. “X - The winter chill’s set in now, so I’m writing to tell you that I’m closing my window
                 and that this’ll be the last you’ll hear from me because I can’t find the words to make this better
                              and every line i write is just a eulogy to us.
                                           Good-bye.

                                    Yours no-longer
                                             My heart (and mine alone)”
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Author's Comments

is this poetry or prose??

Any ideas? I kinda need some help with this piece.... its annoying me...

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:iconcynicalfire:
i luv this so much... from start to finish and i hav a feelin it fits with poetry rather than prose :D
:icontraja:
I think is rather a poetical prose if U know what I mean ;)

For me it's a lovely, sad diary of Broken Heart.
Congrats: Gr8 job!
:iconx-dainty-dreamer-x:
^^ glad ya like it - thanks for the fav :D
:iconjaexsyra:
Wow. You're one of the (very few) people I really enjoy reading from. Always very inspirational. :hug:

--
:floating: "There is no fate. Life, you build it yourself." :floating:
:iconx-dainty-dreamer-x:
<3 that's the sweetest thing anyone's said to me in a long time
:iconyetanotherasian:
That was an awesome piece X3 your work is really touching
:iconx-dainty-dreamer-x:
:D i'm really glad you liked it! Thanks for the watch <3
:iconvelocity07:
This is sooo beautiful! I think it passes as poetry.
I love it. You use words very nicely! :heart:

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